"Inspired by Elmore Leonard's 10 Rules of Writing, we asked authors for their personal dos and don'ts," the Guardian says. Their answers come in two parts, both worth reading and both stuffed with thoughts applicable to all writing (beyond fiction) and, in some ways, to life.
Leonard's starter list is good. At #4, we get: "Never use an adverb to modify the verb 'said' … he admonished gravely. To use an adverb this way (or almost any way) is a mortal sin. The writer is now exposing himself in earnest, using a word that distracts and can interrupt the rhythm of the exchange. I have a character in one of my books tell how she used to write historical romances 'full of rape and adverbs.' "
Following are my favorite 10 rules from the Guardian's collection of lists. Have a look at the lists and online or offline tell me your favorites.
Margaret Atwood
"6. Hold the reader's attention. (This is likely to work better if you can hold your own.) But you don't know who the reader is, so it's like shooting fish with a slingshot in the dark. What fascinates A will bore the pants off B."
Roddy Doyle
"1. Do not place a photograph of your favourite author on your desk, especially if the author is one of the famous ones who committed suicide."
Geoff Dyer
"6. Have regrets. They are fuel. On the page they flare into desire."
Jonathan Franzen
"2. Fiction that isn't an author's personal adventure into the frightening or the unknown isn't worth writing for anything but money."
Neil Gaiman
"5. Remember: when people tell you something's wrong or doesn't work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong."
Hilary Mantel
"5. Be aware that anything that appears before 'Chapter One' may be skipped. Don't put your vital clue there."
Michael Moorcock
"9. Carrot and stick – have protagonists pursued (by an obsession or a villain) and pursuing (idea, object, person, mystery)."
Michael Morpurgo
"1. The prerequisite for me is to keep my well of ideas full. This means living as full and varied a life as possible, to have my antennae out all the time."
Andrew Motion
"3. Honour the miraculousness of the ordinary."
Joyce Carol Oates
"4. Unless you are writing something very avant-garde – all gnarled, snarled and 'obscure' – be alert for possibilities of paragraphing."
And bonus Franzen: "10. You have to love before you can be relentless."